Thursday, March 8, 2012


All Quiet on the Western Front Chapters 1-3 Analysis

Author’s Note: I tried to write this poem from the point of view of a soldier going about his day while including a common motif I found. Despite the fact that he knows he has a job to fulfill and lives to protect, he’s held back by the guilt he feels and he’s reminded of it every time he looks at his hands that are stained red by the blood of the deceased.

I wake up
My dreams have fled
I’m in reality
With my hands stained red.

I’ve lost my appetite
Despite the bread
It’s not savory
With my hands stained red.

I head out
Through the mud I tread
My head hangs low
With my hands stained red.

“We’ll fight till we win”
The sergeant said
So I hold my gun
With my hands stained red.

I help my friend
He’s already dead 
I lay him down
With my hands stained red.

I can’t sleep
I lay in dread
It won’t ever leave
With my hands stained red.

So I stay put
Wrapped in bed
And wipe the tears
With my hands stained red.

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